- too emphasizes on the waiting part - not enough drama on his urge for food and "no food" at home - what is the usage of mooncake in your story? Mom wants him to eat because of no food? Or mom wants him to eat because it's Mid Autumn Festival? - No drama in the last shot because she acts on her own
謝謝Anna，阿蘇，權峰，浩然的幫助。
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Anna 升級當媽媽了0.0
嘘，小点声。。。
Anna so funny!
等待到發火離去很清晰啊~ 可惜家裏沒做飯稍微沒看出來（11張了吧這裏……）
- too emphasizes on the waiting part
- not enough drama on his urge for food and "no food" at home
- what is the usage of mooncake in your story? Mom wants him to eat because of no food? Or mom wants him to eat because it's Mid Autumn Festival?
- No drama in the last shot because she acts on her own
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